Finally, a new poem

As always I am still working on this poem - any comments would be helpful

Corner of Ralston and Wadsworth

A heavy black woman
foxtrots; shaking to the beat.
Earbud detonation.

A trained dolphin
backflips through crystal
waters.

2 comments:

  Allen Family

May 8, 2009 10:02 AM

I really like the poem scott. You are such a good poet. I also like your pic of you and cayden. My two favorite men!!

  John Gallaher

May 10, 2009 5:45 PM

Someone has to get into a car now.